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I assembled them, arranged them in our stone ring
before the sun was off work, before he was fading
donning his pajamas
while he was still up watching the 6o'clock news, I was
making charcoal patterns, flowers, squares,
stars and hearts, preparing for the sun to yawn
nod off and leave us to our living
My hands, powdered and gloved in coaldust,
are a testament to the way I want to
invigorate you with my drowsy dollface
and the midnight fire reflecting from my eyes.
You're the type of person I dream about in history class,
when everything seems laid out like a doctor's diagnosis: you're picturesque
despite your halfjoking hopelessly sucked-under pickup lines:
'let's count shoulders.'
and who knows what my crushsymptoms
really mean. You float in my head, surreal.
What proof that you ever existed
what evidence to make us solid, would
outline itself on this paper? I can't
show you the animal kingdom, the wolves,
butterflies, and ants that pester me when
she mentions your name.
I am the one who can catalogue your
sighs. I can order your
passions. And regardless of what
adolescence screams at us: the man inside you
raises a brass fist,
untarnished, transcending time.
they weren't tears but they ripped through me
when heaven let go and this is what the mailman
witnessed this morning when he delivered three bills,
a newspaper, and nothing from you:
there is
a running-mascara puddle around a stonering
of sleeping coals arranged in a perfect circle,
or as close as she could get.
Coals waiting for a wildfire day,
pining.
before the sun was off work, before he was fading
donning his pajamas
while he was still up watching the 6o'clock news, I was
making charcoal patterns, flowers, squares,
stars and hearts, preparing for the sun to yawn
nod off and leave us to our living
My hands, powdered and gloved in coaldust,
are a testament to the way I want to
invigorate you with my drowsy dollface
and the midnight fire reflecting from my eyes.
You're the type of person I dream about in history class,
when everything seems laid out like a doctor's diagnosis: you're picturesque
despite your halfjoking hopelessly sucked-under pickup lines:
'let's count shoulders.'
and who knows what my crushsymptoms
really mean. You float in my head, surreal.
What proof that you ever existed
what evidence to make us solid, would
outline itself on this paper? I can't
show you the animal kingdom, the wolves,
butterflies, and ants that pester me when
she mentions your name.
I am the one who can catalogue your
sighs. I can order your
passions. And regardless of what
adolescence screams at us: the man inside you
raises a brass fist,
untarnished, transcending time.
they weren't tears but they ripped through me
when heaven let go and this is what the mailman
witnessed this morning when he delivered three bills,
a newspaper, and nothing from you:
there is
a running-mascara puddle around a stonering
of sleeping coals arranged in a perfect circle,
or as close as she could get.
Coals waiting for a wildfire day,
pining.
Literature
your breath in mine.
A budding passion, once encouraged, can turn insatiable.
Delectable as éclair, though its taste, is far more forbidden.
Satisfied only by an unspoken language of tongues entwined.
A flush of ecstasy heats the senses, entices and gratifies.
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Always
Alone upon the hill,
you stand.
Winters hand,
grips your limbs,
cold wind ripping,
at your core.
Just a shadow of yourself,
stands before the world.
But fear not,
soon winters hold,
will be burnt sunder.
Once more the light,
will fill your core.
Once more you shall bloom,
once more the beauty,
in you shall shine.
and know this,
alone you shall never stand,
for no matter were,
no matter what.
Be it light,
be it dark.
You shall always,
have a freind,
in me
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Welcome to my Mind
Welcome to my mind
Is it safe?
Is it happy?
Or is it dark?
I cannot tell you, nor can my mind.
Good luck with what you find.
From each corner grows
Something exciting, something new
Creating is what I do.
Though for each light bulb corner
There is a shadow.
Control them?
No, I've tried.
The battle rages on forever inside.
All I can hope
Or all I can do
Is balance the demons, with creation anew.
- Jon D. B.
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begs for editing.
ideas?
help me scream like a drizzleday that has lost all hope for sun.
help this piece show waiting and waiting and losing hope.
ideas?
help me scream like a drizzleday that has lost all hope for sun.
help this piece show waiting and waiting and losing hope.
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I like the beginning (first stanza) and the end (last three, maybe four, stanzas) the middle didn't do much for me. I guess I should have just said I wasn't fond of the second stanza haha.
"donning his pajamas" - that's just great. I really liked your personification of the sun.
"donning his pajamas" - that's just great. I really liked your personification of the sun.